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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: What went wrong? Fri 20 Nov 2009, 1:18 am | |
| What ever happened to
When
Everyone knew
What was goin on
What made it all go wrong?
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Waustin24
Level 0
Posts : 7
Join date : 2009-11-19
Age : 28
Location : Beavercreek, Oh
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 23 Nov 2009, 12:00 am | |
| Let me show you how it's done.  There once was a boy named Graham. He wanted a Christmas ham. So he went to the store, But they had no more. So Graham just ate some turkey.  | |
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 23 Nov 2009, 2:10 am | |
| But i dont really write limerics theyre to synonomous with men from Nantucket that step in buckets
I write wit feeling
I never let me out
My mind wont work that way.
Like a frightened child looking on
I see that my might is gone.
Now thats writing.
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Waustin24
Level 0
Posts : 7
Join date : 2009-11-19
Age : 28
Location : Beavercreek, Oh
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 23 Nov 2009, 6:20 pm | |
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Admin-Miller
Admin
Posts : 103
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Fri 04 Dec 2009, 7:29 pm | |
| A canner, exceedingly canny, One morning, remarked to his granny, "A canner can can anything that he can, But a canner can't can a can can he?" Mine's the best!  lol | |
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Sat 05 Dec 2009, 10:05 pm | |
| Wow!!!
Your aliteration
Is in small denomination,
Like frustration
Around the degredation
Of your elation. | |
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Admin-Miller
Admin
Posts : 103
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Sat 05 Dec 2009, 11:13 pm | |
| When i went out,
one winter day,
I thought to myself,
"Merry christmas, Luke!" | |
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Sun 06 Dec 2009, 6:02 pm | |
| I'm sorry to say
But in a wordy way
you just got slayed | |
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Admin-Miller
Admin
Posts : 103
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Sun 06 Dec 2009, 8:27 pm | |
| I did, so sad, now you're banned. lol, jk.  | |
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 07 Dec 2009, 1:06 am | |
| Kool.
Cuz i got scared
That
I was ...
I
Couldn't rhyme anymore sorry | |
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Admin-Miller
Admin
Posts : 103
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 07 Dec 2009, 10:07 am | |
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 07 Dec 2009, 6:27 pm | |
| HEY thats my thing P>) but mine has a nose so WHAT!! | |
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Admin-Miller
Admin
Posts : 103
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Mon 07 Dec 2009, 9:39 pm | |
| oh... That's what that... thing is...  | |
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Tue 08 Dec 2009, 8:22 pm | |
| what'd u think it was?
P>) | |
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Admin-Miller
Admin
Posts : 103
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Wed 09 Dec 2009, 9:49 am | |
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shades 9
Level 0
Posts : 11
Join date : 2009-11-13
Age : 29
Location : the bar
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Josh
Level 0
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
Location : Brookville, OH
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Wed 16 Dec 2009, 9:15 pm | |
| Wink Wink Nudge Nudge. Say no MORE!! | |
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EManLava
Level 1 (For lack of a better name)
Posts : 34
Join date : 2009-11-16
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: What went wrong? Wed 30 Dec 2009, 5:54 am | |
| There once was a man from Peru,
Who dreamed he was eating his shoe.
He woke with a fright
in the middle of the night,
to find that his dream had come true.
lol | |
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