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What do you think of my writing?
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Josh
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PostSubject: What went wrong?   Fri 20 Nov 2009, 1:18 am

What ever happened to
When
Everyone knew
What was goin on
What made it all go wrong?
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 23 Nov 2009, 12:00 am

Let me show you how it's done. afro

There once was a boy named Graham.
He wanted a Christmas ham.
So he went to the store,
But they had no more.
So Graham just ate some turkey. clown
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 23 Nov 2009, 2:10 am

But i dont really write limerics theyre to synonomous with men from Nantucket that step in buckets
I write wit feeling

I never let me out
My mind wont work that way.
Like a frightened child looking on
I see that my might is gone.

Now thats writing.
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 23 Nov 2009, 6:20 pm

Whatever, mine is funny.
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Fri 04 Dec 2009, 7:29 pm

A canner, exceedingly canny,
One morning, remarked to his granny,
"A canner can can
anything that he can,
But a canner can't can a can can he?"


Mine's the best! Cool lol

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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Sat 05 Dec 2009, 10:05 pm

Wow!!!
Your aliteration
Is in small denomination,
Like frustration
Around the degredation
Of your elation.
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Sat 05 Dec 2009, 11:13 pm

When i went out,
one winter day,
I thought to myself,
"Merry christmas, Luke!"

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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Sun 06 Dec 2009, 6:02 pm

I'm sorry to say
But in a wordy way
you just got slayed
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Sun 06 Dec 2009, 8:27 pm

I did,
so sad,
now you're banned.

lol, jk. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 07 Dec 2009, 1:06 am

Kool.
Cuz i got scared
That
I was ...
I
Couldn't rhyme anymore sorry
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 07 Dec 2009, 10:07 am

pirat

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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 07 Dec 2009, 6:27 pm

HEY thats my thing P>) but mine has a nose so WHAT!!
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Mon 07 Dec 2009, 9:39 pm

oh... That's what that... thing is... Shocked

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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Tue 08 Dec 2009, 8:22 pm

what'd u think it was?
P>)
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Wed 09 Dec 2009, 9:49 am

I didn't even know...

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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Wed 16 Dec 2009, 12:30 pm

you two are still stupid Twisted Evil santa
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Wed 16 Dec 2009, 9:15 pm

Wink Wink Nudge Nudge. Say no MORE!!
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PostSubject: Re: What went wrong?   Wed 30 Dec 2009, 5:54 am

There once was a man from Peru,
Who dreamed he was eating his shoe.
He woke with a fright
in the middle of the night,
to find that his dream had come true.

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